Re: On the Other Side of the Glass
I applaud the whole illustration, still I think you’re being repetitive.
It seems to me that you are addressing a lesser version of yourself to encourage the new you or something similar…
Fate is defined as 1. force predetermine events: the force or principle believed to predetermine events 2. outcome: a consequence or final result
3. destiny: something with decisive or far-reaching consequences that inevitably happens to somebody or something 4. disastrous consequence: a disastrous or ruinous outcome.
If one is standing in front of a mirror then you’re reflecting, making an evaluation of yourself(past to present). From your poem I see a reflection not necessarily Fate.
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?

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