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Old 12-04-2005, 09:44 AM
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Smile The Alphabet Rhyme

I wrote this hoping that it may inspire the very young, accompanied by an already old friend of theirs - the alphabet, to become familiar with rhyme and rhyming. Ideally images should accompany it, as I have done in my book in order to understand some of the lines. E.g. 'D' is for daschund - will he ever stop; as in the unusual length of the dogs etc.

A is for apple
See the pips inside

B is for bear
He's trying to hide

C is for cake
With candles on the top

D is for daschund
Will he ever stop

E is for engine
Take a train ride

F is for fish
With mouths open wide

G is for Gorilla
Beating his chest

H is for hippopotamus
Having a rest

I is for Igloo
An Eskimo lives in it

J is for jumper
Your aunt likes to knit

K is for kitten
What will you call her?

L is for love
You get from your mother

M is for milk
Drink this and grow tall

N is for nuisance
Whenever you fall

O is for octopus
With eight long legs

P is for puppy
Who sits up and begs

Q is for queen
But she is a bee!

R is for rainbow
What colours do you see?

S is for shoes
How many in a pair?

T is for tiger
Look if you dare!

U is for umbrella
Which keeps you dry

V is for vet
For animals that cry

W is for whale
Far out at sea

X is for x-ray
Of your sore knee

Y is for yesterday
It's the day before

Z is for zebra
Go off and explore!

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Old 12-04-2005, 10:38 AM
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

I LOVE IT! It is so cute ^.^
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Old 17-04-2005, 09:54 PM
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

feels like i should get back into nursery!
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Old 18-04-2005, 09:32 AM
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

is that good or bad? it is for pre school
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Old 18-04-2005, 04:53 PM
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

definitely good. i would have learnt to be taught the alphabet this way rather than the conventional A for Apple, B for Ball...etc.
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Old 18-04-2005, 04:58 PM
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Thank you sooo much...lol
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

I likie it too. Back to nursery for me!
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Old 27-05-2005, 05:41 PM
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lol thanks
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I can most definitely see this as a published book. All the images you gave could be understand by any child around the world.
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I can most definitely see this as a published book. All the images you gave could be understand by any child around the world.
Thanks rena .just have to keep getting it out there
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

I really like this! It's so fun!
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Old 01-06-2007, 05:52 AM
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I really like this! It's so fun!
and its not hard either..lol
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Awesome Lu! Wish I was taught like that... Back to nursery indeed. Haha
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Old 19-03-2008, 04:38 AM
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Indeed! ah ah thanks nupur
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Thisis really cute. You guys seem to have a lot ofd fun here.
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Du you have to be w a writer to join? i've been lurking around today and enjoying reading a lot of stuff. I might be able to write limericks. but i'd like to read and comment.
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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

An excellent little rhyme! I could definitely see this being published into a picture book. Only problem is, is that some of the words are kind of advanced. Like N is for nuiscance (which could probably be used to describe me lol).

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Re: The Alphabet Rhyme

Thanks....i thoguht that once, but after research and some advice, i was also told not to patronsie but encourage kiddies..even small so there you go....we nevev know or can win