[colinbaker62]

" Daaaaad....................... ..........? "

" I know you've always told me dad
There's just one Santa Clause.
And everything you've told me dad
I do believe of course. "


" It's just that while out in the town
Today with mam I saw,
Not just one Santa Clause. No sir !
I counted TWENTY-FOUR ! "


" I saw one on a skateboard,
And two driving cars.
There were four in McDonalds,
That's seven so far ! "


" I saw one Santa cycling,
One juggling three balls.
There were two riding scooters,
What's seven plus four ? "


" And guess what ?
THERE WERE MORE ! "


" I saw five Santas jogging,
And three all in pink.
There was one in a police car,
That's twenty I think ? "


" Oh and two rollerblading,
One rattling a tin.
Plus a really fat Santa
Asleep in a bin."

"So"

" One, plus two, plus three is seven.
Add four more, that makes eleven.
Add on nine, plus a couple more
How many Santas ? TWENTY-FOUR ! "


" And though I'm really muddled now
My mind's all wizz and tizz.
I keep on yelling to myself
ONE SANTA'S ALL THERE IS ! "


" I asked mam why, she cried 'Ask dad'
So how come dad in town,
One Santa Clause, plus twenty-three,
Were wandering around ? "

[Storiesmaniac]

Colin you've done it again my friend. Great work. Funny stuff.

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by storiesmaniac

Colin you've done it again my friend. Great work. Funny stuff.

Hello 'storiesmaniac' and thanks for posting comments..

[DarkPower]

as christmas things go I like this one.. its sweet and cute

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by DarkPower

as christmas things go I like this one.. its sweet and cute

Hi DP and thanks..DP is the moderator for me..And that's the truth !

[Lubesh]

another blinder colin.keep it up!

[Wordsmyth]

Really nice collin. I enjoyed this as I do all of your poetry.

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by mww70

Really nice collin. I enjoyed this as I do all of your poetry.

That's very kind indeed. So I'm a poet am I ? That's what they call those mad people that try and convey a message in a few words. Well I do !

Seriously though, thanks..
And thanks again
and again
and again
etc
etc
etc

[HUNNYBUNNY]

i saw this the first time yesterday of wonder and i didnt say anything because everyone else already say all that i had to say about it but i came back today just to read it again. its so cute it really reminds me of my little sisters when they were just a few years younger. they always seemed to ask me ? like that but how come i saw (whatever the case was). anyway i think i should read more in this sections. i never really checked it out before. nice work and i cant wait to see some of you other stuff.

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by HUNNYBUNNY

i saw this the first time yesterday of wonder and i didnt say anything because everyone else already say all that i had to say about it but i came back today just to read it again. its so cute it really reminds me of my little sisters when they were just a few years younger. they always seemed to ask me ? like that but how come i saw (whatever the case was). anyway i think i should read more in this sections. i never really checked it out before. nice work and i cant wait to see some of you other stuff.

Hi and thanks for your kind comments. If anyone is interested, I've decorated this poem as Christmas is nearing.Vist this link to see TWENTY FOUR SANTAS if you wish !

http://www.colinbaker62.com/childrens%20poetry3.html