[NervousWriter]

i love how you combined the words in this poem its very creative and imagitive . its very detailed. : )

[Coolness]

I like the new perspective this poem gives to balloons after a party. There really is a sad idea to it. I never thought about it that way and I really appreciate that. I like how you differentiated the colors instead of just saying something like "another balloon." The poem was easy to read because it flowed well. I think the last line about the pieces reeling is the best line of the poem.

[Lubesh]

Thanks...for inflating my ego...ok bad pun lol