[colinbaker62]

Skin! Skin! That skintastic of things
It's AMAZING! Of that there's no doubt
For that skinny and stretchy elasticky stuff
Keeps our insides from all falling out

[Corneac]

ha ha ha, I liked that. is skin really elasticky?

Great poem colin, really good stuff!!

[Phonoho]

It reminds me of a classic radio jingle or a descriptive ad for a toy you could order from the pages of vintage comic book. Bright, lively and full of fun. Remember itching powder?(scratch,scratch)

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by Phonoho

It reminds me of a classic radio jingle or a descriptive ad for a toy you could order from the pages of vintage comic book. Bright, lively and full of fun. Remember itching powder?(scratch,scratch)

Thank you Phonoho..It might have some mileage in it as a jingle, especially for the over 80's age group.


Colin

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by Duncan

Great poem colin, really good stuff!!

Duncan with a 'D' is the commenter for me..


Colin

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by Corneac

is skin really elasticky?

It is in this house!

Thanks my friend


Colin

[Stamile]

An enjoyable poem though a bit short you're very creative though, i like that. I'd like to see how you'd do on a deeper topic. Fun though.

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by Stamile

An enjoyable poem though a bit short you're very creative though, i like that. I'd like to see how you'd do on a deeper topic. Fun though.

Hi Stamile and thank you for these thoughtful words..


Colin