yea, i've been meaning to go over it because i think there's loads of errors. but thank you shatteredsight!!

[shatteredsight]

Your Welcome! Keep it up, I'm hooked on the story now !

Make sure when you're editing you don't sacrifice the individuality in your writing voice, or the overall tone of the story. Once again, GOOD WORK, originality at its peak!

lol, thanks. this idea was banging around in my head long before i discovered the fun of writing. i'll only change spellings where necessary i think. thanks again.

[LYNDA]

Hey again Dunan, my friend... I know I've read this before, but I still greatly enjoyed it.

There were parts in there that maybe step on some peolpes toes(like what one believes) I'm A very open mined person and think you did A jod well done, by far one of your best.

[Perscription]

witty story, I enjoyed it all the way through

[Brandeno41]

very nice enjoyed reading it check my story when it gets posted

[ea_blue]

I certainly enjoyed this one. Views of heaven as a bureaucracy going through the usual motions are always amusing to me.

I wonder if the Walrus holding the spotlight is a reference to the Beatles song ("I am the walrus...ooohhh!")?

I was kinda expecting a punchline or some kind of kicker to finish it. Instead, it just ended. Still I had a good time with this one. Thanks for sharing.

[Sith Lord Jim]

I really really enjoyed this. May have had a few mistakes, but it kept me interested the whole way through. I would very much like to see more of this.

[Aleox]

This was a very fun story, unique and never taking itself seriously. I think calling it anything like blasphemy would just be naive, as the humor is self-reliant and harmless, and it's not trying to prove a point, or anything of the sort. The characters were fleshed out well, some ignorable errors...I just want to know what happens next. Perhaps Gary uses some of Nigel's responses on his questionaire, and accidentally changes Earth for the worst, since Nigel's clearly an incompetent fool. Then all because of this bum Nigel does Gary lose his hope of becoming God, the true God buys some Rogaine and gets rid of all the Godlets, and sets the new Earth as it should...taking a week or two break, of course.

Ha, just an idea...