Disease Life

[Peppy]

Tell me again. I’m not sure what you want. It’s difficult to understand you when you have so many thoughts plaguing you. You regret everything, scrambling your brain to believe there’s no peace. Static noise and myriad beep, beeps and boop, boops.

There will always be another way to express yourself. Everyone is blind from time to time--to continue on walking with closed eyes, especially when the edge is so near and sharp.

Crying for pity is not the same as crying for roses. You may feel dead enough to feel like you deserve roses, but life is something you have to wait for to wilt. Love is substance, desire is danger.

Though the depression will continue to seep into your persona, it will pass and come back. No one can stop the sunset or the sunrise, it’s just something that must happen forever and forever and on and on.

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[StrangerThings]

I can't believe no one has commented yet.
This could read like a poem. It's insightful and thought provoking. The fact that you can do that with such a small writing piece, is fantastic.

Love is substance, desire is danger.

That was my favourite line, punctual and effective.

Well done.

[dorian hanes]

I think maybe…(It’s difficult to understand you when you have so many* thoughts plaguing you.).

I think maybe…(Static noise and a* myriad of* beep, beeps and boop, boops.).

A QUESTION-Wouldn’t ones’ mind be ‘scrambled’ by more than ‘regrets?’

I think maybe…(…, especially when the edge is so* near and sharp.) If ones’ eyes are ‘blinded,’ then how could one know or detect the edge’s proximity and depth?

What about…The depression will wash over your persona as a dark, black wave rushes into the shores then back again it goes out with the currents. No man can stop a sunrise nor one of many God’s natural sunsets (OR…How does one stop God’s so many sunrises and sunsets?) . It’s something that will echo through the passing/coming of ages. (?).

You have here a Most Captivating SOC. It’s Extremely Powerful, but with a bit more of something that I can’t identify, I think it could be Exceptionally More Commanding.

[Peppy]

Thanks for the comments, StrangerThings and Rena.

I usually have a psychotic episode, a mild one, and write as if I were drinking pristine water. Dunno why I said that. Hee hee hee.

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[Vorcla]

It's sufficiently strange for an SOC - and that's meant as a compliment. You tapped into whatever was going on in your mind and let it rip, which is how the best SOCs are done.

Nice job, Pepster.

[Peppy]

Pepster. I haven't been called that since Duncan...

Anywho, thanks for editing and commenting on it, Vorcla.

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[Tay M.]

That was fantastic! It needs more posts than it has.

Love is substance, desire is danger.

That line was very nicely written!

I thought it read off so smoothly, and so elegantly, it really felt like it was being said off an extremely thoughtful and wise mind.

Beautiful piece of writing, Johnny.

[Peppy]

Originally Posted by Rain

Beautiful piece of writing, Johnny.

*Peppy hisses like a vampire in sunlight*

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Thanks, Taylor. For the comment.

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[Persephone]

I could see there was an overall theme tying everything together, and all the lines were beautiful, but in some parts (even if this is an SOC) didn't seem to relate at all.

(also in the third line: 'especially when the edge is sp near and sharp' it should be so*, right?)