Really you are the one whom i'm searching for a long time, even though i didn't see you but i can tell you, you are sexy + beautiful women.

[niamhoneill]

I have to be honest, I'm afraid I didnt like this story. I didn't think it was very well written. It is littered with gramatical errors, which obviously is frustrating for the reader. I also disliked the character, not because she cheated, but because she was so utterly egotistical, therefore I was not interested in the outcome of the piece. I hope you don't take offence at my honesty.

[marty2shorty]

nice story!
there was a definite and spectacular turn point towards the end that made it really good
love how it turns out the husband's the asshole

[Bissme]

bissme here. thank you for your comment. thank you for liking my stories

[S.Augustus]

too short. I wouldve liked to know more. Was really hard to know what was going on as the level of english isnt so great either. I think a lotof work needs to be done on this. I wouldnt really call it a story as such. More of a character brainstorm maybe?

[GermanRose21]

Wow, shocking, I definitley did not see the husband as the actual source of the affairs. Nicely done. However, the story just has a very abrupt ending to it. It just kind of states that the husband wants these affairs and boom its over. I'm also intrigued as to where you got the idea for the story.

[WorldWarCheese]

Thank you, spam-bot, but...

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[DarkPhoenix]

I enjoyed this. It was interesting and different. good work

[beverent]

It's a good story. Unusual because it displayed too many flaws on the character but the flaws made her more enticing, more interesting. There are errors: grammatical and typo. I would site some of them to help you out in your editing...

"I had slept with countless dashing man that shown any slight interest in me and the worst thing is, I feel no guilt"

I think this would be better:
-I had slept with countless dashing men who've shown any slight interest in me and the worst thing is, I feel no guilt

"Jhanvi, your beauty is so breath taking - it is like watching a peakcock spreading it beautiful feathers."

A correction on "peakcock" - it shoud be peacock, shouldn't it? And the "it" should be its"

"That was what one of her many admirers said. He was a poet and naturally, he was more creative in his words in describing my beauty compared to my other admirers. "

This part is confusing. You suddenly changed into a third person. The POV should be clear and should not be abruptly changed especially at the middle of the story.

"I have no fears at all of my husband catching me with my skirt down"

Fears should be fear... *smile*

"I found one of those websites where people are looking for purely sex and no strings attached"

I suggest: I found one of those websites where people are looking for pure sex - no strings attached

These are some of the errors I've seen. Hope my suggestions will improve this story if you choose to follow them.. Your paragraph is 'spacey-ish'. It would be better to cluster related sentences into a paragraph so your story will be more clear and clean??? hehehe! Anyways, goos story, disturbing but good.