[Bissme]

The Unfaithful Wife

by Bissme S


I have been married for the past seven years. And in all those years I have not been faithful to my husband.

I had slept with countless dashing man that shown any slight interest in me and the worst thing is, I feel no guilt.

If anything, I am proud of each of my affairs. I regarded them as an achievement, as an accomplishment - some kind of trophies that I won.

Being born beautiful, I was never lacking with admirers. When you are beautiful, it doesn't take much to seduce men into your bed. Men are so easily seduced and I am simply baffled why they are known as the stronger sex.

"Jhanvi, your beauty is so breath taking - it is like watching a peakcock spreading it beautiful feathers."

That was what one of her many admirers said. He was a poet and naturally, he was more creative in his words in describing my beauty compared to my other admirers.

Of course his aim is no different from my other admirers - to taste and to feel my beautiful curving body.

Interestingly, I have no fears at all of my husband catching me with my skirt down. I am confident that my husband will not throw me out; he will never divorce me.

He can't live without me. He needs me more that I need him.

Initially I went to single bars, waiting for men to pick me up. Then internet enters the picture, and things became easy.

I found one of those websites where people are looking for purely sex and no strings attached.

I learned that most men are like dogs - they will never refuse a bitch in a heat.

The men I choose are rather rugged looking, manly, sexy and most of all, could be trusted to keep a secret.

I always imposed for safe sex - no condoms no sex. I was not interested in catching any veneral diseases. I was naive enough to believe condoms will protect me from any sexual diseases.

I also bought a luxury condominium which I turned into a love nest... where I will take my lovers for passionate and lustful lovemaking sessions.

Most of my lovers loved the way I decorate the apartment - with mirrors almost every corner of the house including my bathrooms.

"I am vain and I loved to look at myself." I justified my decoration taste rather wittily which often drew laughter from my lovers.

Besides, the mirrors help to spice up the sex acts and that keep the men so happy.

Of course I have my own manipulative reasons for the countless mirrors around my condominium.

Behind every mirror in my house is a camera which record all my lovemaking sessions.

Of course my lovers are ignorant of this fact. They don't know that their images and their lust has been captured forever.

Oddly enough, I have never seen any of these visuals. Pornography has never been my cup of tea. It baffles me why men find pornography so fascinating.

With my husband, it is a totally different story. My husband is always eager to see what the camera has captured in my love nest.

In fact my husband is the one who coaxed me to be unfaithful.... to satisfy his lust.

He gets a big turn on when he sees strangers making love to me. The only time he will touch me is after a stranger has made love to me. He wants to smell other men's lust on me.

I loved my husband too much to disappoint him... to break his heart.... to turn down his request. For my husband's sake, I became the unfaithful wife.

[Radiodenver]

Good story Bissme. Your grammar and punctuation need a little cleaning up. Longer paragraphs with better description maybe, the elusive style isn't quite right, I was able to figure it out too quickly I think. The story though, if cleaned up and tightened up would be much better and it's pretty good reading as it is.

[Bissme]

hello radiodenver,

thanks for your feedback. A writer like me always looking out for feedbacks whether it is postive or negative. At least he knows his work is being read. thanks taking your time to read the work and taking time to write this comment. i really appreciate it.

[foltgee]

Good start to an interesting erotic story. You should probably consider this the start of a longer work, although I'm not sure if the longer version would be appropriate for this forum. (I might be wrong, but so far I haven't seen anything too "explicit") Your longer version might want to bring more attention to the relationship between the husband and the narrator. Did he encourage her to be unfaithful so that his jealousy could bring out the passion in him? Or is it his way of punishing her because on some level he doesn't respect her? What other humiliations does he put her through? Finally, how does he react when he realizes just how much his unfaithful wife enjoys being unfaithful?

Good luck!

[Bissme]

hello foltgee.

thanks your compliment and suggestion. I really appreciate them. I really appreciate the fact that you took your time your time to read this piece. I really do. thanks for your suggestion. It will be helpful to me. thanks again

[Sabrina]

wow..interesting twist.

[Bissme]

Originally Posted by Sabrina

wow..interesting twist.

thank you very much for reading my story and giving me your comment. a writer always look forward to any kind comment. thank you

[RENA HANDS]

The story of a VERY LOVING WIFE.
The story of a VERY QUESTIONABLE HUSBAND.
I applaud the efforts of this story of nonconformitity.

[Bissme]

Originally Posted by RENA HANDS

The story of a VERY LOVING WIFE.
The story of a VERY QUESTIONABLE HUSBAND.
I applaud the efforts of this story of nonconformitity.

thank you for your compliment. i really appreciate any feedback that i get for my stories.

[moonmaiden]

This is a really disturbing little "confessional". I'd like to see where it all ends as clearly, this woman is headed for some kind of melt down somewhere along the line. I'd like to know more about her motives... is she a sex-addict? Do her addiction and her husband's just happen to mesh so perfectly? I like the voice very much. I "get" that part of the impact is that the voice is so matter-of-fact versus the lifestyle she describes but I'd like to see her "humanity" finally rise above...
I guess I'd like a little "light at the end of the tunnel" here. Maybe we could learn that she is secretly plotting her revenge against all these men (husband included) who she has allowed to use her as an object.
What I really liked was the "knock your socks off" clarity of the voice. A terrific little story - I think it could lead somewhere really cool. moonmaiden

[Phonoho]

The piece feels quite narcissistic to me, more like a journal entry. Perhaps I am merely one of the "dogs" she refers to, but I can smell a "bitch" in heat. I would tone down the self-love and give her husband a more prominent role in the work.

[NLuv]

lets see....
'I had slept with countless dashing man that shown any slight interest in me and the worst thing is, I feel no guilt. '
-major gramatical mistakes here, this would be correct:
'I have slept with countless dashing men that had shown any slight interest in me and the worst thing is, i feel no guilt.'

'Men are so easily seduced and I am simply baffled why they are known as the stronger sex.'
-maybe 'baffled as to why they are...'

"Jhanvi, your beauty is so breath taking - it is like watching a peakcock spreading it beautiful feathers."
-not 'it feathers' it's 'its feathers'

'That was what one of her many admirers said. He was a poet and naturally, he was more creative in his words in describing my beauty compared to my other admirers.'
-you changed the point of view? and then changed it back? it sounds strange.

'Then internet enters the picture, and things became easy.'
-just isn't right...not sure what to suggest for that...it depends on how you're meaning to say it

'I found one of those websites where people are looking for purely sex and no strings attached.'
-maybe 'with no strings attached' would sound better? or 'purely sex, no strings attached'?

'I was naïve enough to believe condoms will protect me from any sexual diseases.'
-either needs to be changed to 'i am naive enough to.." or 'i was.....condoms would...'
-which this sentence doesnt really fit...says nothing about her learning otherwise later on...

'...I turned into a love nest... where I will take...'
-tenses don't match

'...with mirrors almost every...'
-'mirrors in almost...'

'...acts and that keep the men...'
-either '...acts that keep...' or '...acts and that keeps the men...'

'...a camera which record all my lovemaking...'
-'records'

'...their images and their lust has been captured forever.'
-change has to have


i think there are a few other mistakes, puctuation and such

the story is a good idea...has potential...but it really sounds as if you were just typing and kept going until the end...some sentences don't fit as far as the ending goes...
i wonder why she would say she weren't worried if he caught her cheating or not when in the end we all know she knows he knows anyways(haha one of those sentences)

but anyways...i think you could improve it and make it much better, i think of this as a good start

[ejenk21]

I have been married for the past seven years. And in all those years I have not been faithful to my husband.

....

In fact my husband is the one who coaxed me to be unfaithful.... to satisfy his lust.

He gets a big turn on when he sees strangers making love to me. The only time he will touch me is after a stranger has made love to me. He wants to smell other men's lust on me.



I didn't notice the creepiness of this marriage until I went back over the piece. How long has this been going on? Since day one? A strange duet which affects my view of the wife and certainly makes her not seem loving.

[Stamile]

I'm sorry i wish i could say i enjoyed this one but i didn't. I find it a little dull, and it didn't really make that much sense, at first she seems to be an unfaithful slut, and then we find out it that she isn't an unfaithful slut she's just doing what her husband wants. Also i don't like how she's just telling us about her life without really showing us anything. I think you should show us not tell us what she is like. I don't mean to offend.

[BookWhale***]

Wow! Interesting twist.

I think that there are past/present tense and singliar/plurals that need to be fixed though.

seems a bit unrealistic to me...

[Wordsmyth]

Unrealistic? No, I.m sure this happens all the time. There are some freaky people out there. If some people didn't like sharing or watching their significant others there wouldn't be swingers and swappers clubs. (I know because I'm not just a member of one, I'm the president)

As far as the grammar and punctuation, yeah there is some work needed on that. I also agree that it sounds like a journal entry rather than a story. It would probably make a good begining to a story. Start it out with the journal entry and then go from there, tell us what happened after that. Were there any adverse consequences?

[Disposition]

it's a fiction story after all..so it's an unrealistic story. However, that's quite wrong if people are like that..

[Razor]

wow, I didn't see that coming. There are some grammar errors and what not, but the one that stood out to me was the switch from 1st person to 3rd. "That was what one of her many admirers said." The rest of the story is 1st person I believe, but it isn't that big of deal, I enjoyed your piece. Thanks.

thank you for your comments ( the good ones as well as the negative ones) . a writer is always looking out for comments. Only then he can improve. thank you for taking your time to read this piece and comment on it. really i appreciate them

[Bissme]

thank you for all those who have given comments on my stories. a writer is always looking for feedback and comments on his stories. Any comments is always helpful.

[bb17bb17]

Whoa, very unexpected. Makes me wonder where you got the idea from.

[Aeli]

Interesting piece. Ditto to the stuff about grammar. Also, you need to work on the voice of this woman. Right now there is something there to spark interest, but not enough to really grab the reader, yet. Try really interrogating your characters, start with the obvious of apperance, favorite clothing etc, then move into absurd details. You don't need to use this details, but I've found that just by knowing them informs the voice of the character. The voice of the character will be much more mutli faceted, and real. I believe that the realer this narrator is, the more disturbing the twist will be in the end.

Honestly reading this to my peers as an assignment to my college class. amazing twist and so unexpected that it just blows you away... needs to be tightened up a little.