Closed Form PoetryIf there is a definitive conclusion, and the poet decides to use a specific pattern, such as meter or rhyme, the form will take on what is known as closed form...
I love love love the way you wrapped this one up. It was perfectly done! Awww poor Mike, damn those bots will probably just keep me alive to spite him now! But back to your work, brilliantly done, you are really polishing your poetry!
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Originally Posted by Wordsmyth
See I'm not worried at all. Bri would save the alcohol and her wolfman in the process.
Ahhhh....I've never felt so loved before! Two poems for me
Wonderful as I said before Nup.
Thanks Mike, and we all love you! And three poems for you, not two. See? We love you more than you think.
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Originally Posted by Keplaz
This was really brilliant Nupur. Excellent work and the "terminates" still cracks me up.
Thanks. Haha... that 'terminator' reference solved my problems with that line. Syllable count and the 't' to go with tears. Haha
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Originally Posted by Venomous Vixen
I love love love the way you wrapped this one up. It was perfectly done! Awww poor Mike, damn those bots will probably just keep me alive to spite him now! But back to your work, brilliantly done, you are really polishing your poetry!
Thank you, Bri! Personally I felt the ending was a little lame, but oh well...
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Originally Posted by Jimbalaya
Awesome, Nupur! The "Terminate" reference kicked my ass!
Two poems for me 
will eat you!
Personally I felt the ending was a little lame, but oh well...
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