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08-04-2008, 02:00 AM
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Nonet - One
**Nonet. I was going to submit this in the CFPC, but I came up with absolute trash. Lubesh helped to such an extent that this should have been her entry, if not a co write. Thank you Lu.
Seemingly frigid, the galaxy steers, One lone star, it peregrinates Seeking out destination A destiny perhaps? With questions never Singular or Incomplete Unique One
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10-04-2008, 03:28 AM
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I particularly liked the first line "Seemingly frigid, the galaxy steers" I can't help but love that, frigid was a great use of word. And I like the stanza work on it too. Great job as always Nupur
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10-04-2008, 03:31 AM
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Thank you! The credit for those lines goes to Lu.
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