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I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
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08-04-2008, 09:24 AM
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I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
I left heaven to be with you,
Just because I'm a friend so true. Could not bear to see you alone, Now I lie beneath your tombstone. It was my choice; I wanted to. I left heaven to be with you. A gift I brought within my sack, Never ending bottle of Jack. It's just something I could not miss, Eternity in drunken bliss. I left heaven to be with you, But then, what did you up and do? You had yourself resurrected, Leaving me feeling rejected. What I wish that I could undo? I left heaven to be with you.
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08-04-2008, 09:26 AM
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Re: I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
Here is the one that I removed for the CFPC. Unfortunately I just deleted it, along with all the comments, instead of moving it. So if you commented on it before, you need to remember exactly what you said and repost it here. Anything else is unacceptable.
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08-04-2008, 09:29 AM
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Re: I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
*scratches head* I can't even remember 5 minutes ago, all I know is this is a damn fine piece of writing, and I love it!
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09-04-2008, 01:11 AM
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Re: I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
Haha, I don't remember what I said either, but I do know that I love this one!
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09-04-2008, 02:01 AM
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Re: I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
This is terrific! Actually I stumbled here by accident, not going through the other entries (sorry) but I'm glad I cam here and read this one.
 Always like your entries but this one is special. I can identify with it beautifully!Hirak.
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Who has understood the meaning of time, For time alone is a mirage of a kind. For to find time, is a dream of Man, To be a man, whom time shall find. Hirak.
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09-04-2008, 05:10 AM
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Re: I Left Heaven To Be With You (For Bri)
Thank you!
Thank you! and Thank You too!
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POINTS. FOR ENTRIES 250 - LIMERICK, CFPC, 55, EMWE 1000 - TotM, 1000 WC 100 - VOTING IN CONTEST POLL
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