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01-05-2008, 12:28 PM
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Sole Survivor
Soothing, healing of torn
Old wounds Lashes are a memory Instincts gone Turmoil breaching, overwhelming, but Undoing all the damage done Dying never just growing stronger Ever decreasing circles of loneliness ends
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01-05-2008, 01:02 PM
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Re: Sole Survivor
Hmmm. A hopeful one this time, Lu! Like the first nice day in the spring after a horrid winter. Nicely done.
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01-05-2008, 01:05 PM
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Re: Sole Survivor
Hopefully...thanks Rick
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02-05-2008, 02:19 AM
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Re: Sole Survivor
For me this one relates to a lot of our talks... the docs and the pills and whatnot, and the lifting of the haze and fog now that all are gone and the body is pure once again. Hopeful, yes, but more than that, cleansed. This one speaks volumes in a tidy little package.
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02-05-2008, 04:36 AM
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Re: Sole Survivor
If it ever is intenional (my writing)maybe it is to some degree, but yes it would fit..quite well. Thansk bri.
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04-06-2008, 05:15 AM
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Re: Sole Survivor
Excellent stuff as usual....
Closed form is too difficult for me. I just tend to write what I like and in any way, shape or form. You, and all others who exhibit a talent for this kind of structured poetic writing, deserve credit for sure. Colin
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04-06-2008, 12:34 PM
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Re: Sole Survivor
Thank you v mcuh colin...and i beg to differ....u could very probably.
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