[Masa]

Lifeless human eyes,
See nothing but death and pain,
Soul seeks compassion.
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Foolish little boy,
Writing stories in journals,
Is he a writer?
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Scratching sounds within,
Horrible, frightening screech,
Nothing but a mouse...
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Violet flowers,
Lovely blue and red petals,
Don't you love nature?
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Beautiful green eyes,
Dark brown hair and caring gaze,
A girl to cherish.
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Patiently waiting,
Always maintaining a watch,
The wicked hunter.
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Under shady tree,
The windy plains and clear skies,
Just simple pleasures.

[SeaN]

Masa skillfuly crafted words my friend. nicely done!

[Masa]

Thanks NYU! I enjoy these... so simple... yet soaked in my own personal meanings no one will understand them all!

[Lubesh]

accomplished set of haiku.great stuff masa.

[Masa]

Thank you very much Lubesh!

[BrokenParadox]

^_^ I love haikus!! These were really good Masa.

[Serac]

Ha. Not bad, man. They're all so short and simple; The way they're meant to be, I guess. It was nice that they were all.....you know, not gloomy. It's always good to see something from you, whether I read it or not. I think I'm doing ok in keeping up with some of it, though.

[Masa]

Thank you Broken Paradox, seeing that you like Japanese stuff and I took note of your own haiku every now and then, not to mention some from Eadha Deora, I had to throw this piece together in order to catch up!

And Serac, my old friend, I can't shame your name! Thus I must endeaver and be sure to put up such things that will please the masses, and so I can be known as your successor proudly!

[RENA HANDS]

Patiently waiting,
Always maintaining a watch,
The wicked hunter. (:love Evilly wicked, but in a most artistic way.

I love this stanza. Graciously so humbly I give 5/5!