[Masa]

A thousand kisses,
Upon your dear, smiling face,
And a warm embrace!
---
The cherry blossoms,
They fall, pink and embarrassed,
For now they've seen you!
---
A writer's hand shakes,
Your hand steadies the weakness,
Two smiling faces.
---
Harmonious music,
Played from your lips and your breath,
It's simply wondrous!
---
Allow these last words,
To touch your very being,
"I've always loved you"
---

[BrokenParadox]

You're welcome! Lovely set of haikus Masa-kun. Very beautiful ^__^

[angel]

aww masa this is brilliant 3rd part anymore?

[Masa]

I've always had shaky hands, but this remedied some of my weakness, heh.

[Corneac]

You should be proud Masa. Darn proud. I do not speak to you because these words are astounding to have come from one so young. But because they are beautiful. Simply beautiful. If a accomplished poet had written this or the wisest man of all had shown me this I would tell them exactly the same thing. Be proud.

[Masa]

Well thanks Corneac, um... this is a very pleasant compliment given to me, I will be sure to remember this next time I feel pathetic!

[Corneac]

Haha. You better. No more of this I can't write any thing good nonsense.

[Masa]

Oh dear, I fear you've all been misunderstanding me!

Masa knows he's a perfectly moderate poet, but I always say something along these lines-

Compared to the beauty of this poem Corneac... Masa is a worthless sham on the face of the earth... my poems, in your own's perfection, suddenly went up in flames due to their shame..."

When compared to you my good man, I am all that is unworthy. One day, though, I'll be sure to be up in the Poets of Storiesmania!

[RENA HANDS]

Perfection! Simply creative excellence! Another 5/5!:lov e: