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Despondent Deity
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25-07-2007, 10:39 AM
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Despondent Deity
An Exercise in Alliteration
Daylight devoured by darkness, Doves dragged, drawn down Dippers dispersed diagonally Deserts divided Descendants departed Deafness drizzled down. Drooped deity, Draped in dazzling diamonds, Descended downward on Displayed deceased daughters Distraught, disturbed Deserted divinity Distributed dishes of Delphiniums, Delores, and Darlings. Rena Hands July 2007
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
 Last edited by RENA HANDS; 22-02-2008 at 02:20 PM. 
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26-07-2007, 09:06 AM
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Re: Despondent Deity
Impressive, very impressive!
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11-10-2007, 12:13 PM
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Its Bloody Brilliant!
I love the creativity used to create this piece. And it isn't as easy as one might think either. Well done!
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10-03-2008, 10:11 AM
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Wwwhooofff…as always wiping my forehead in relief that someone has enjoyed another of my writings. And you’re correct writing this was not easy. Thank God I had Lubesh to assist me in this creation.
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10-03-2008, 10:29 AM
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and iprob gave u a word and some punctuation......rena is a modest soul...stop it!
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10-03-2008, 07:29 PM
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I bet this didn't come easy. Wonderfully written. The alliteration does not look forced at all. Awesome!
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11-03-2008, 01:15 AM
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Very well done Rena!! I have never been able to do one like this and my hat is off to anyone who can not only do it but do it was grace and style!
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16-07-2008, 10:06 AM
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Lubesh, Me ‘modest,’ never…lol But I am most graciously grateful that you were able to assist me in yet another welcomed creation.
Nupur, The ideas just rush me like a wave, it is the execution, transfer of mind to paper that is a real b*tch…lol! But thank the heavens and stars that I have so many talented and informative friends of this site to assist me in my times of need. As always, I am very ecstatic to read/know that you have enjoyed my submission. More are to come…devilish smiley. Venomous Vixen, happy much to read/know that this write is appreciated by such a GREAT writer as yourself. As for ‘style and grace,’ thank you very much for that.
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
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