[RENA HANDS]

A question to you, the reader individual mind thinker...does the lash evoke ecstasy or is it simply torture?

Anticipation, sweat drips down,
Bouncing off trembling, awaiting fingers,
Resting on bent knees.
A whip hisses, its leather mane strikes out
and down upon porcelain flesh,
Exhilaration,
A serrated edge burns,
Euphoria,
Crimson rivers seep down,
Ecstasy,
the hollow recoil,
Elation
of the shallow crackle,
As raven tendril strike back down.

Rena Hands July 2008

[Lubesh]

Has your hallmark on this..nciely executed.lol Wonder why i think such words.Well done.

[Vorcla]

A little S&M to liven up SM, eh, RENA? Nicely done. Very vivid imagery.

[RENA HANDS]

Lubesh, Thanx again for your invaluable assistance. This creation could have been offensiveness rather your additional vocabulary and punctuation made it sensual…my ultimate goal.

Vorcla, What can I say…I love the dark side of the human psyche. And I love it even more when I can put to paper an idea that entertains for so many without crossing the lines of vulgarity.

[Peppy]

Wow, I have to say, you a painted a hideous picture in my head. But you did give me the feelings to accept what was happening. It seems to flow well, I'm impressed.

Though I think this is pretty contradicting (I guess that means I missed the meaning entirely). We humans are strange creatures. Are we truly "Whipped" when bad stuff happens to us? No, I don't think so. Sometimes they mean everything and nothing.

Pretty good poem, RENA HANDS.

[RENA HANDS]

A ‘hideous picture?’ Interesting!

I was trying for sensuality, but I’ll ‘hideous.’

Every reader like each individual writer has their own literature view. No writing is ever ‘contradictory,’ every reader has their own interpretation. It’s my way of saying and I’m sure I’m rambling by now…there is never any wrong elucidation.

Thanx for the read and comment.

Tomorrow I go after your writings…(devil smiley).

Where by the way have I seen that picture you have there with the frypan? What movie does it come from? It’s on the tip of my tongue, alas a brain fart prevents its telling…lol