[Venomous Vixen]

**Have not written in a while - this one is rather short but baby steps back into the heavy stuff **

Raven talons,
clusterfucked and drawn,
hungrily tearing at my mind again,
entrails of splattered thoughts consumed-
devoured and digested in your ever hungry belly,
in your ever searching raven talons,
clusterfucked and drawn-
tearing me
apart.

Now that kind of reminds me of a diamante. I think that's how you spell it Diamante, but not quite. It's just the shape that deceives me.

Pretty good. I enjoyed the visual sensations you sent throughout my head. I sometimes feel like this, but instead of Raven Talons I get "Harold" or Downtown_Peppy. Regardless of my mental fault, I like this deeply.

[RENA HANDS]

Welcome home.

Always, always I am APPLAUDING your vigorous imagery…

…entrails of splattered thoughts consumed-
devoured and digested in your ever hungry belly,

[Rain]

Imagery was creative, and the piece was small and captivating. Small review for a small poem .

[Vorcla]

I think it is a diamante, and a good one. You may have been gone a while, but it doesn't look like you've lost a step. Now think what it'll be like after you leave the stress of the old job behind - after tomorrow.

Nice work, honey.

[Nupur]

It's not a diamante because of the specifications of the form, but this is good poetry for sure. I love the shape and imagery. It's harsh and in-your-face, thus making it very effective. The repetition is good and suits the poem well. Nicely done. Feels wonderful to see your work after such a long time.