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28-10-2005, 03:40 AM
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Dark Kitten
Blood dripped from the walls
Carpet stained where they had lain
In the corner sat a Dark Kitten
Who had watched them all be slain.
Her eyes glistened warmly
Glowing like a green blur
She licked her paw carefully
And cleaned the blood from her fur
Then, purring quietly, she crept
Out the door and into the night
Moving like a shadow
Never caught in the light
28-10-2005, 11:10 PM
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Re: Dark Kitten
very interesting perspective. You are pretty good at the rhyming game.
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29-10-2005, 06:21 AM
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Re: Dark Kitten
Thank you, I try, hehe. Rhyming is my favorite scheme, it gives it more structure and flow I find, though I have been known to throw out a free-verse once in a while. DK
01-11-2005, 10:44 AM
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Re: Dark Kitten
Very very interesting poem. It always seems that the least likely - is the most likey, doesn't?
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02-11-2005, 01:29 AM
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Re: Dark Kitten
Indeed... and thank you for the comment BookWhale!
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No prob...
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25-11-2005, 08:58 AM
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Re: Dark Kitten
I agree with maniac, it is different perspective that makes the poem unique to say the least. No one expects the cat, a common occurance in crimes these days. lol
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Re: Dark Kitten
haha I wonder just how many cats commit muder and get away with it?
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Re: Dark Kitten
dark, and in its own class
26-11-2005, 04:32 AM
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You are very kind!
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Re: Dark Kitten
Yes more it to dark. Because it's evil.
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Re: Dark Kitten
hmmm ok, I think I will switch the Dark Kitten Saga into "Dark" then...
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Killer kitties....i missed these too. it's such along time ago... and i was shy then...moving onto the next
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Re: Dark Kitten
Intriguing, a different view of possible crime scene?
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