[Lubesh]

Originally Posted by Nowhere Man

lol...a launch pad

spring board then...whats wrong with launching pad..lol

Everyone says launching pad...

[LullabyHearts]

You really captured my attention with the first line and I love this all the way through. Great job.

[Nupur]

This is something different. I haven't read a lot of your Dark works and this one simply blew my mind. Your talent for poetry never ceases to astonish me.

The rhymes were beautifully used. The entire story you told left me spellbound.

Brilliant!

[Lubesh]

Thank you nupur.....means a lot.

[Peppy]

Now this I like lots. Awesome imagery. Awesome evilness. Awesomeness is all I can say. It quenched my thirst for dark, and it's usually insatiable. But this was enough... for now. Bwa ha ha.

Good read, glad you STICKY-ed this. Thanks for sharing.

a glow

aglow

[Lubesh]

Thank you lol is that u peppy?

[Peppy]

Originally Posted by Lubesh

Thank you lol is that u peppy?

Yes, or what was left. He'll be back, I think.

[Vorcla]

Well, I hope Peppy hurries back - I'm having major problems with this incarnation! ^_^

Lu- wonderful! Exhumed just in time for Halloween. Spooky, creepy, has a nice squirm factor. Wish I'd have written it.

Originally Posted by Lubesh;

She vanishes, withdraws to her mind's tomb

Oh, nice. She's gone to a place from which she dares not return.

I'm glad what's-his-name brought this back! ^_^

[Lubesh]

Thank you.lol I love peppy for his digging....not jsut mine.