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Old 08-01-2009, 03:21 AM
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Re: [PICK] Cocaine Diaries

I found a classic. .

Wow... That was brilliant. Such a unique poem, and not a word out of place. I have to say your 4th stanza was one of my favorite stanzas I've ever read at SM...

"Walls closing in, illusionary visions
Liquid distortion, tears from your eyes
Exhaling, unconfidence, your only best friend
Living in the mirror, but more so in your head"


That struck me as pure brilliance. Can't explain why, or how. But I liked it. This is great... and where have you been anyway, man?
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Re: [PICK] Cocaine Diaries

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I have tasted your loss, and reveled in it
I have bested your best, and gloated about it
I have never lost to you, and sometimes I wish
I wasn't so arrogant, so right, so complete

Cocaine diaries, marijuana mysteries
Drugs polluting your body, only they feel right
Unreasonable dictions, restless behavior
I'm gone, only temporary, I'll be here tomorrow

a-m-a-z-i-n-g need i even say more?
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Re: [PICK] Cocaine Diaries

Okay.....apparently i am just going to spend the day reading all of your work..........always captivating and thought provoking........I got it because I've lived it
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Re: [PICK] Cocaine Diaries

wow, great poem!
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Re: [PICK] Cocaine Diaries

HI,

This diary its very useful for the cocaine addictors,thank you for your posting..


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