[colinbaker62]

Only Mousy
has been able to establish an in
timate relationship with me.
And this, only by a miracle
of abnegation, patience, and under
standing; by a deliberate self
subordination, and a refusal
to make demands.





Colin Baker April 08

[Lubesh]

I don't profess to understand where your head was or were painting at the time, but Uni paid off!lol

[Vail]

Well... Colin, you never cease to get the mental wheels rolling. I'm wondering where you borrowed this from, and your all chopped up is evident. I actually liked how you chopped it up, giving the piece it's own flair. I'm not sure if this style is unique or not yet, but it's pretty sweet and it's the first I've seen of it's kind. I don't know whom Mousy is... but I do know that I had to look up the word abnegation. The definition I made on the fly in my mind wasn't crazy far off target, but nonetheless I know a new word now.

Pretty good stuff, it has it's own broken flow to it.. if you get what I'm saying.. I like it.. the snags were well-thought out, and placed expertly... It actually added poetic value to the piece. Good stuff as usual bro. Thanks for sharing.

[colinbaker62]

Lubesh and Vail thank you. And Vail, a double thank you for your most interesting analysis....



Colin

[xtremelady]

Great play with words – economical yet well chosen – clipped/chopped yet perfect for the expression given. N1

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by xtremelady

Great play with words – economical yet well chosen – clipped/chopped yet perfect for the expression given. N1

Xtremelady, thank you..



Colin

[RENA HANDS]

I fully heartedly confess…I don’t know your thoughts, but I love your selection in vocabulary. It, they always jump out and stab my mind. So well done to that.

[colinbaker62]

Originally Posted by RENA HANDS

I fully heartedly confess…I don’t know your thoughts, but I love your selection in vocabulary. It, they always jump out and stab my mind. So well done to that.

Rena, thank you.


Colin