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Re: Watch for the Sun
Nice. Kind of a breath of fresh air. The elements - sun, shadow, light, air - all expertly blended and held together by your imagery, your style. I felt very relaxed after reading this. Excellent work, Lu - "damned fine."
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Re: Watch for the Sun
I liked how the shadows almost felt like a nusance here... like they were trying to play and ended up in the way. The word rejuvinationg comes to mind, the word selection comes across peacefully and just leaves one of those nice smiles across my lips. Well done!
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Re: Watch for the Sun
Thans both for that.....and ur findings i didn't think much of them being anything cept yes in her way and what was found now, so thanks
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