[Lubesh]

Skilful, playful
Shadows of once,
Lost for a moment, half heartedly
Ensconced
In my day, the sun the air and wind,
Which brings much back to me as I play again.

The shadow leans over,
Wilfully blocks out my sun,
And sounds of warm and tender ripples
Amid listening ears
Waft at the day, a day nearly done.
I smile into the new light,
As the shadow disappears,
I reach for the skies and the heavens
Amid all my years,
One day you will find it,
As easily as it found you,
So lie still on your back
Just here,
For another day or two.

[Vorcla]

Nice. Kind of a breath of fresh air. The elements - sun, shadow, light, air - all expertly blended and held together by your imagery, your style. I felt very relaxed after reading this. Excellent work, Lu - "damned fine."

[Venomous Vixen]

I liked how the shadows almost felt like a nusance here... like they were trying to play and ended up in the way. The word rejuvinationg comes to mind, the word selection comes across peacefully and just leaves one of those nice smiles across my lips. Well done!

[Lubesh]

Thans both for that.....and ur findings i didn't think much of them being anything cept yes in her way and what was found now, so thanks