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Re: Warming of the Future
Hmmm. Intriguing. I get the sense of someone coming through a long, protracted trial - an illness, perhaps? - and coming out the other side. There's a metaphor, a parallel, maybe, between cold and sickness, and warmth and health. I could be dead wrong, but, Lu, this describes almost perfectly how this year has been for me. Right now, it's pretty good, but prior to this it's been hell.
This is clean, simple, and well-written. Vivid imagery; I can feel the chill and enjoy the warmth. Nice work, as always, from you.
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Re: Warming of the Future
yep somethings like that. And yes fits ur bill also. keep yer chin up!
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