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Love Fruit
Peaches -
in their own juice. Colin Baker August 2008 Last edited by colinbaker62; 02-09-2008 at 12:16 PM. 
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02-09-2008, 01:02 PM
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Re: Love Fruit
Hmmm...interesting.
Possibly sweet and homey, possibily a little dirty and tongue-in-cheek, or maybe just completely without a particular meaning, just to laugh at the reader a little. Well, whatever you intended, it's certainly not dull. Made me raise an eyebrow, laugh, and actually search for your meaning and think, more so than the last "deep" poem I read. ^_^ Nice one.
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03-09-2008, 02:13 AM
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Yep. glad she said all that. I went on my merry way also.but 'nice' nonetheless.
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03-09-2008, 08:11 PM
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Thanks 'D'...And your desire to read more from less is most welcome...All your interpretations are valid for sure and most interesting (and yes, one of these suggested interpretations is in the spirit of the poem, as I had intended it)... Colin
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03-09-2008, 08:12 PM
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Thanks 'Miss L'.... Colin
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29-10-2008, 03:18 PM
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Hilarious. I thought the piece had some humour. A spoof almost. When I started thinking, I thought it was kind of lewd, but then again my mind is twisted and my neck is wrung.
It does raise some eyebrows, I'm not even sure what it could mean. It could mean many thing to different people. Or it's more about reaction than anything. 
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29-10-2008, 03:35 PM
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I hope I am not offending. I interpret this to be... naughtay! But yeah, it is funny though.
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11-11-2008, 02:48 AM
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How could anyone think such a thing of me? 
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20-11-2008, 03:27 AM
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Oh jeez I didn't think of it like that...
 Certainly caught my attention. Dearest seemed to explain it very well... I have to agree with her.
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23-11-2008, 09:52 PM
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