[Lubesh]

*(')Thank you Marie Osmond...good friend and neighbour lol

‘I realise the way your eyes deceive me…’

Masked in their vanity, layer upon layer
hide insanity, fired and poised ready to seize
a gaze so eagerly waiting to please.

‘With tender looks that I mistook for love...’

As cold as the earth’s clay and the blackest scour
of emotion so callous was driven to plunge
deep within a real heart waiting for love.

‘So take away the flowers that you gave me…’

Now that I rest here eternally with a broken heart’s
curse that is death’s numb pain, save your roses
for the next willing victim of your bastard eyes’ aim.

[Vorcla]

I like the way you fill in between the lines of the song with your own interpretation - right up to the damning stanza at the end. And I can hear the twangy pedal steel guitar in the background too. Nicely done, Lu.

[Lubesh]

Thankee v much lol was thinking of herall the timelol Music like that shouldn't be aloud?

[RENA HANDS]

I don’t know this Osmond chick (not..lol), but this is the opposite of her happy go lucky, loving life and being in love image...and I LOVE that! I am ENAMORED by the last stanza/paragraph. I rate with a wicked smile plastered upon my face... a of 5/5!:la ugh: