[MindsEye]

Glassy eyed deviant...
dwelling on moments tines;

skewered and gasping,
drawn of tightening lines;

sweltered and succulent,
blessed of dining ways;

swimming crooked, drifting,
among the crashing waves.
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- another quick one that came to me recently... strange I did not even see the obvious images you all may see until I read it though again... and as most I am truly unsure of any inspiration... they find me.

[Rain]

That was terrific, I also liked the the two line at a time, it made the piece flow very nicely. Just the way you wrded each and every moment made this absolutely brilliantly done, all I can give you is good words. Great stuff.