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Lu...this is a hopeful poem, tempered with caution, but no heartbreak in sight! Are you feeling all right?
All kidding aside, I like the theme of "pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and start all over again." The images you use, as always, are exquisite. I'd end up quoting the entire poem, but I especially liked "Pummelled since are the crystals in her dreams;" "Sew all your hopes and spin out the debris / To make fabric of purest silk fit for a queen;" "Life’s tapestry is threadbare for now, but only / You can sew the stitches and make a new one in between." Gaahhh! Wonderful stuff! A really hopeful message with some great writing. Nice job.
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Thank you very much Rick..there is doom and gloom there if u look and she's broken hearted lol
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...yeah, but there's sunshine coming through the cracks in the roof, too.
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Nah, I deleted those lol
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Hahahahahahaha, Oh i love you Anita!! I missed your poetry for sure! I'm on a little commenting spree today, and I had to tell you how much your poetry means to me. I always get inspired reading your work, it's beautiful, even when the message isn't. Your writing just seems to flow so well, and it's odd but even though it doesn't show up like this i always imagine your work written in long flowing cursive writing.
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am not that old timbo....feathers ..ink.hmm I missed you scumbag....hope ur well. Thank you very much as alwasy ur flattery works a treat.
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