[Rain]

Following you, begging for you to speak
It's painful, my chances are bleak
My time is limited, I am to leave soon
Fly away, drift like a balloon

You turn around, tears streaming down your cheeks
Comforting you, I hold you in a manner that is meek
Knowing that I might never see those eyes
Every ounce of me crumbles and dies

I wish I didn't have to go
Why do I have to go?
How is this fair?
I don't see how it is fair

My every desolate being begins to break
Tears stream down my face, all God does is take
Cherish every moment that you are in
Don't cry when you lose, Don't gloat when you win

Open your eyes, make it worth while
It seems that everybody is in denial
It can all come to an abrupt end
Love your Family, Love your Friends

There we are, me holding you tight
It is my time to leave, to take flight
There is no need to fight and try
Because this is our Last Goodbye

[Venomous Vixen]

Great message in there, hun. More than that I love work that can apply to many different aspects of life and relationships... this could be young love, a best friend who is moving away, even someone who is dying. It is that final good bye and moment where time no longer lends a hand but brings an end. You did well with form here, and you have that signature mark of questioning in there... which in turn makes the reader ask the same and apply it to moments where they have thought over similar questions in their mind,. Great work, Tay!

[Rain]

Ah, Thanks Bri for commenting, I was wondering if nobody liked it... lol. And yeah, I do seem to do the questioning a lot I hope I can move away from that eventually(not for everything, but I cant keep putting it in every poem I write) but right now it's something that I'm gonna stick with, for nearly everything I write, because it helps me with my flow for some reason, helps me click. Thanks for the comment

Tay