[Eadha Deora]

What light have you
unthinking and unkind
snuffed out, stuffing back behind
into the back shelf of the refrigerator,
unwanted and unfound
like sour milk foolishly downed
because there was no thought on
the natural course of things,
that even your fierceness
could turn love in all its goodness

far beyond keeping.

[Vorcla]

Thought provoking. Interesting metaphor, too. Works on a couple of different layers of meaning, and is very clever. Nice, Jenn.

I've been tied up running the Werewolf game, and I intend to get to your new poems asap, hun.

[RENA HANDS]

Well thank the gods that I don’t have the years or extensive knowledge of metaphors, but I must state that its words, superficial beauty is MAGNIFICENT! A rating of 5/5!