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Old 08-12-2005, 10:15 AM
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[PICK] Seasons End

A fragile flower bends in the breeze
Its petals drop one by one with such ease
They lay on the ground and then blow away
The buds that had blossomed are gone in one day

That same fragile flower echoes our love
The seed we planted was nurtured above
We once blossomed but have now slowly faded
Our strong passionate vines have since become jaded
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Old 08-12-2005, 11:26 AM
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Re: Seasons End

That was so beautiful, and sad, lubesh.
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Re: Seasons End

Beautiful is a good word for it. Awesome emotions. good work.
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Re: Seasons End

hmm I love this poem. very heartfelt
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Re: [PICK] Seasons End

Love the rhymes. It is sad, bittersweet and a beautiful piece.
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Re: [PICK] Seasons End

it is an enjoyable read but then again everything you wirte is enjoyable to read
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Re: [PICK] Seasons End

Thank you both.
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