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[PICK] Seasons End
A fragile flower bends in the breeze
Its petals drop one by one with such ease
They lay on the ground and then blow away
The buds that had blossomed are gone in one day
That same fragile flower echoes our love
The seed we planted was nurtured above
We once blossomed but have now slowly faded
Our strong passionate vines have since become jaded
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08-12-2005, 10:26 AM
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Re: Seasons End
That was so beautiful, and sad, lubesh.
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09-12-2005, 12:34 PM
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Beautiful is a good word for it. Awesome emotions. good work.
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11-12-2005, 12:15 AM
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hmm I love this poem. very heartfelt
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Re: [PICK] Seasons End
Love the rhymes. It is sad, bittersweet and a beautiful piece.
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Re: [PICK] Seasons End
it is an enjoyable read but then again everything you wirte is enjoyable to read
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Thank you both.
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Re: [PICK] Seasons End
Lubesh, you've given me so many comments, and I apologize I have not returned the favor.
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Oh, my - an early one of yours, and wonderful to boot. Shame on me for missing it. "Damned fine," Lu...
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This even older than the one I just replied to... Loved the rhymes, and the whole concept the poem brought forth. Nice, Lu. Very nice.
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Thanks again.
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Once more you’ve Brilliantly Illustrated a balance of Beauty and Ugliness. Finding love and its Loss. The Youthfulness of the Heart and the Aged Wisdom of the Mind…
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Thank you dear friend.
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