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17-03-2007, 08:15 AM
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Love Unrealized
Oh, but there was no kiss,
And only if there were to passionately murder, facades of fate's control. With the stab of crimson knives, shed new tears to cleanse my soul, to wholly relieve me of the ground cushioning my fall. The salted tears, Diluting your cold, running blood, Raping me of this dream, and waking once again.
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I won't rent you my time, I won't sell you my brain, I won't pray to a male god, that would be insane. And I can't support the troops, cuz every last one of them is being duped, and I will not rest a wink until the women have regrouped. Last edited by JirQUEST; 19-03-2007 at 03:16 AM. 
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20-03-2007, 08:23 AM
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Re: Love Unrealized
Apparently no one knew what to make of this poem, b/c it's the only one no one has replied to, lol...so, sorry guys.
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I won't rent you my time, I won't sell you my brain, I won't pray to a male god, that would be insane. And I can't support the troops, cuz every last one of them is being duped, and I will not rest a wink until the women have regrouped.
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20-03-2007, 09:08 AM
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Re: Love Unrealized
Sometimes it takes time and its a hit and miss thing stumbling on something once its in the background...
I liked it i am off to read more of ur stuff i have missed re time.iwas catching up earlier.I enjoy ur poetry keep it coming! Oh, but there was no kiss, And only if there were to passionately murder, facades of fate's control ...outstanding.
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20-03-2007, 10:49 AM
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Re: Love Unrealized
Yes indeed outstanding..I love your work Venus and I missed this one.
Utterly beautiful, your descriptions ar so vivid yet so emotionally damning at the same time. Quote:
These descriptions, such rich language. You, poet, you.
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21-03-2007, 12:15 AM
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Re: Love Unrealized
Lol. I lov eyou guys!
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I won't rent you my time, I won't sell you my brain, I won't pray to a male god, that would be insane. And I can't support the troops, cuz every last one of them is being duped, and I will not rest a wink until the women have regrouped.
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23-07-2007, 08:06 AM
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Re: Love Unrealized
Love is free fall is it not and so to is heartbreak?
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
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