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Old 05-12-2008, 08:03 AM
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A Portrait of Night

It is the night-time
which loosens our hearts from
the anchor of day
where everything
must hold
its own face
to the world,

but now,
now in the darkness
the senses descend like midnight mist

a palpable primordialness,

as if the ancient night has
dissolved all scales that deaden touch
and the scars caused by a shell
outgrown but not discarded.

And here,
here in the darkness,
we are adrift on the sea of formlessness,

able to perceive what lies
beyond
the refractive atmosphere,
and all other lives obscured by light–

a thousand distant suns
that spin across a black horizon,
pinpricks of possibility in the night.

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Re: A Portrait of Night

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Re: A Portrait of Night

Beagle said it - beautiful. What else is there to say? Except maybe incredible. Great job, hon!
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Re: A Portrait of Night

I never know what to say after reading your work.....so redundantly I will again say excellent job
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