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Re: Bathos
Lol!!! Wow! at least we know you're not a molestor . . . now, rapist . . . lol. jk. That's not a joking matter. But anyway. I liked it. I know it's a "romance" one, but the ending made it seem more like it should have been in humor section. lol . . . sorry, but I laughed and laughed when I finished reading it. sigh . . . good one.
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Re: Bathos
Yeah, well I started off writing it seriously, and was until I got to the last two lines, and then they just popped out, I mean, the girl it's about I didn't even meet until she was 17, I dunno maybe I'll move it lol
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Re: Bathos
lol . . . well you're roughly that age too, grrrr . . . so it's not TOO underage. lololol . . . and then there's always tranquility. *giggles and dodges blow from tranquility who is looking VERY opposite her name*
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