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Old 14-04-2005, 03:01 AM
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Hail to the Queen
Now we have a queen
to honor and defend
We shall give our lives
or into darkness she will send
She makes her own language
and we must accept it so
Dont bother to correct her
or she'll deal a fatal blow
When you see her coming
please just step aside
Dont correct her spelling
or she'll correct your pride
I see that her new title
has gone straight to her head
One time she was a human
she cried and she bled
All of that has changed now
so back off or feel her wrath
When someone's head gets that big
it knocks you off your path
She's as pure as snow
well, snow that has been stained
She used to be so humble
now just the memory remains
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Old 14-04-2005, 03:08 AM
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Re: Hail to the Queen
lol I am sorry but that was good. I hope everyone reads it its great. lol. nice to see you have a little humor unlike me. lol
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Old 14-04-2005, 03:10 AM
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Re: Hail to the Queen
Unlike you? You are the source of my humor....It was your joking that made me wanna write this.
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Old 14-04-2005, 03:11 AM
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Well i am glad that you find me so great. As you should of course.
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Old 14-04-2005, 10:52 AM
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Re: Hail to the Queen
it was the sort of humor I like . . . darkly funny. Ironic. . . not enough irony in the world (now isn't that ironic? lol). . . anyway. Good one. I especially like the part about how she "used to be human" (misquote, lol) . . . pride is a horrid curse.
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Old 14-04-2005, 11:10 AM
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Re: Hail to the Queen
I too love a little irony and it came to me when she was choosing her new title....She said everyone must bow to the queen and it hit me....lol
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lol...I dunno why but Alice in Wonderland jus came 2 mind...
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lol...I dunno why but Alice in Wonderland jus came 2 mind...
I hear ya.....even though Ive never read it or seen it
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Old 30-04-2005, 03:20 AM
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I like this one......I think its one of your best . lol.
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Old 30-04-2005, 03:21 AM
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I like this one......I think its one of your best . lol.
You say that cuz you are the subject matter.....lol
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Old 30-04-2005, 03:23 AM
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YUP bow to the QUEEN SUBJECTS
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Old 30-04-2005, 03:27 AM
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lol.....went straight to your head....lol
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"Don't bother to correct her"

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