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Old 27-03-2007, 05:47 PM
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A Moment Interred
Oh by my mighty cuckolds horn,
Harmonious, with inverted sphincter,
By grind and engulfed motion,
Resigned, to a moment we inter,
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Old 27-03-2007, 07:10 PM
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Re: A Moment Interred
This one came very unexpected, and I acutally laughed out loud, very nicely put in just 4 lines. How old did you say you are, 17? Good Lord, if i was writing about these things at that age I'd have got a smacked arse. Although at 17 I probably didn't know most of those words, I was ignorant like that. So yeeeeeeh, great poem.
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Old 27-03-2007, 07:14 PM
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Re: A Moment Interred
Haha...thanks Dunc...
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Good one there...very profound yet funny.
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Re: A Moment Interred
Brilliant! I love these kind of poems. But what the hell is a 'cuckolds horn'? Can you milk one?


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wow corn excellent pure simplicity short n sweet nice one mate

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Looks as if you intended to write more..
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Re: A Moment Interred
again, short but really lacks nothing. funny quick read that i enjoyed.
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