[a&Ω]

You filter the sea through your basket of gills,
Your heart and your gonads are a bundle of thrills.

Little sea squirt, little sea squirt,
Oh you hermaphroditic weird creature,
You eat your own brain; that's not a good feature.

Little sea squirt, little sea squirt,
What are you thinking?
You shoot sperm through the water, while others are drinking.






©2007 Joshua Ledbetter

[Corneac]

Hmm...what section for this apiasu? Humour? Tis brilliant though, quite amusing.

[angel]

lol this is very funny. asp this has nice flow. well put across. well written mate

[a&Ω]

I guess this would be considered humour. I just wanted to randomly write a poem about a weird creature.

[in_absentia]

Made me laugh out loud. Good work man. So good, that I actually wish it was a bit longer although, I'm not sure how much more you could actually say about the sea squirt...

[Lubesh]

re the last line.now u tell us. Nice little sea shanty lol

[a&Ω]

I'm glad people like it.

[Phonoho]

Sounds like a cross between Sponge Bob and a squid or a jellyfish. Could make a good childrens narrative poem if cleaned up a bit. But I like it as is.

[rosetheruler]

It was good for a nice laugh

[Phonoho]

lol