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Old 22-04-2007, 12:02 PM
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Curiosity to the Unknown

All young men have a curiosity,
Unwavering,
A curiosity to the unknown,
So laboring...

Thirteen hundred hours after zero,
For me, study,
For her, a pleasant day of outdoor gym,
It was muddy...

She took the showers as I the hall,
My eye's were brown,
I had mistook the rooms, switched them in fact,
She wore no gown...

Here I am, just as Fate wished it to be,
Thrown out the door,
A curiosity to the unknown,
Not anymore...
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Old 22-04-2007, 01:49 PM
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He he. Very nice. Clever too.
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Old 22-04-2007, 11:56 PM
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Re: Curiosity to the Unknown

Peeping Masa? Be careful there, as this curiosity will soon become a hunger. In the fifth grade, I garnered three good licks from the school principal's paddle for standing on the shoulders of Calvin Webb to peek through a crack in the window of the girls gymnasium dressing room. Didn't see a damn thing but we got punished anyway.
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excellent piece masa. good 1
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Old 23-04-2007, 12:14 AM
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Re: Curiosity to the Unknown

Thanks everyone, glad you liked it!

Hehehe, don't worry Phonoho, I'm not a Peeping Tom. I just tease about it since I'm blind and the girls' locker room has a broken lock, chances are one day I'll have a headache, I'll go to the halls in order to wash my face, and I'll end up in the wrong room...

As a matter of fact I am hungry... I should go grab some breakfast!... it's ten... then an early lunch it is!
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Old 27-04-2007, 12:17 PM
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I liked it a lot. I think poems (especially funny ones) have to have a great last couple lines...and yours does.
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Old 28-04-2007, 10:54 PM
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Thanks! I like it when people find my poems amusing, I like making people smile, that makes me feel good about my working.
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