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30-04-2007, 04:42 PM
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Linguistics
My mother, the sweet creature,
Said those ghosts do not exist.
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l S.M. Classroom l Logic/Reason l Free Expression l "Tyler is the sex..."l "All that we are is the result of what we have thought. The mind is everything. What we think we become. " Buddha
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30-04-2007, 05:47 PM
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that was short n sweet lol. my mum told me that n she lied lol. powerful stuff tl
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30-04-2007, 10:46 PM
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lol its interesting how switching "that" with "those: changes the meaning.
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l S.M. Classroom l Logic/Reason l Free Expression l "Tyler is the sex..."l "All that we are is the result of what we have thought. The mind is everything. What we think we become. " Buddha
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08-05-2007, 06:14 AM
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interesting. i think it would be hilarious if you put "invisible" text in there, like you can only see it if u highlight it...just a though. very unique, and probably the shortest poem ive read, but i did enjoy it more than most.
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08-05-2007, 11:20 AM
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Hmm...I'm not sure what to make of that. Clever and strangely haunting. I managed to wrench my own meaning from that and I will cling to it no matter what you say.
Nice poem Tyler.
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15-05-2007, 11:50 AM
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lol...thanks Corn.
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l S.M. Classroom l Logic/Reason l Free Expression l "Tyler is the sex..."l "All that we are is the result of what we have thought. The mind is everything. What we think we become. " Buddha
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26-05-2007, 11:45 PM
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Uh, I wasn't quite sure what to think about it either. I can see a few things that can be said about it, but I was looking for the highlight kind of text too.
Anyways, it was nice despite being so short. Switching "that" with "those" truly did make a difference.
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28-05-2007, 09:16 AM
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I got from this the mom everyone wants/wishes to remember from their childhood. You captured that in two lines, so congrats. Be careful with short stuff like this though, it's REAL easy to mess up, I have before, gj.
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03-07-2007, 03:27 AM
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lol thanks for the comments.
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l S.M. Classroom l Logic/Reason l Free Expression l "Tyler is the sex..."l "All that we are is the result of what we have thought. The mind is everything. What we think we become. " Buddha
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06-07-2007, 09:00 AM
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hmm, not quite sure what to make about this one. Reminiscence from childhood I guess. But as to the meaning and word choice. Sounds like good advice to me lol.
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