| Notices |
![]() |
|
|
LinkBack | Thread Tools | Rate Thread | Display Modes |
| Sponsored Links |
|
||||
|
Re: Bummer
wow Lu! I'm shocked- seriously! This one is awesome. Seems like a different tone from your usual. I like how flexible and diverse the rhymes and sounds are.
There seems to be a 'building-up' in the third stanza, then a 'winding down' in the fourth. Interesting feel to this one Lu... how should I put this... kind of trippy! Cool one Lu- I like it! |
|
||||
|
Re: Bummer
lol thanks dude! I found an old diary...nah am not that old....i did some research on hippy crap..lol
__________________
Did you know...points are up for grabs....just for entering... 250 - LIMERICK, CFPC, 55, EMWE, 1000 - TotM, 1000 WC 100 - VOTING IN A CONTEST POLL, YES, JUST VOTING! ![]() Comp/Challenges FFFC CFPC 1000-Word Challenge Limerick ToTM EMWE GQC |
|
||||
|
Quote:
|
|
|||
|
Re: Bummer
Wow is all I gotta say, it's chaotic yet simple, takes you up then back down. Much like a high, whether its natural or "enhanced." Great work.
|
|
||||
|
Re: Bummer
Thanks so much...i felt out of touch with my hippy side and lost years thought i would get em back.lol
__________________
Did you know...points are up for grabs....just for entering... 250 - LIMERICK, CFPC, 55, EMWE, 1000 - TotM, 1000 WC 100 - VOTING IN A CONTEST POLL, YES, JUST VOTING! ![]() Comp/Challenges FFFC CFPC 1000-Word Challenge Limerick ToTM EMWE GQC |
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Tags |
| None |
| Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests) | |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
|
|