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Re: Buzz Kill
You tell a great story! I really enjoyed this, especially when the woman spoke.
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Hilarious and a challenge well met lol Is this Ms rena uncovered? haha You are becomin quite an all rounder. Hats off to you.
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intense... great concept... it screams perfection... keep up the good work
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Haha...wow. That's amazing Rean...you painted an intriguing and quite amusing picture. Last stanza was the best, the funniest, but wow...great job Rena. Great use of description.
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My favorite part was your descriptions; specifically in stanza 2. It's great the way your point of view switches back and fourth. Terrific use of language to set a mood. Groovy poem Rena! |
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