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It Never rains, It Pours.
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14-08-2008, 05:41 AM
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It Never rains, It Pours.
What should happen if love remains?
And love without a life - A breath of hope to keep the flame alive Dies, caught by the wind as it faints And falls to its knees, but all too late – It lies snuffed out and just to make sure, Doused on the cold snows, More fatuous flakes fall as reinforcements - Their tight reigns of what ifs and maybes Speed them on their way to ensure that It cannot, should not exist without.
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14-08-2008, 06:15 AM
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Re: It Never rains, It Pours.
I don't like this one. The poem is beautiful, the meaning is sobering to the fantasyland I like to keep my mind in. It's too true, love without life... a partner passing and I dare not think about what that must feel like. In truth though, we all shall pass, and to say in turn we should not love for fear we may be gone is insanity. You never know... and well, I am back off to fantasyland you bubble burster you!
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14-08-2008, 06:40 AM
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Re: It Never rains, It Pours.
yes that's one interpretation or meaning to be had...but even so, been there an done that and its not so bad...least it existed once and cant die?
But this one wasn't my meaning lol
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16-08-2008, 04:16 AM
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Re: It Never rains, It Pours.
well I like this one (sorry Bri!)... but it has a kind of depth and a solitary voice that speaks out, even when it's not "convenient". The subject matter of Love is one of those eternal themes (it has been working its way into my poems a lot lately, dammit) that no matter what you say, says volumes about humanity.
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16-08-2008, 06:16 AM
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Re: It Never rains, It Pours.
Thanks Eadha...maybe ur in love then.
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16-08-2008, 07:04 PM
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Re: It Never rains, It Pours.
haha .... yes but i dont think it's just with a person
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