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Re: Cold Cadence
You know how I read your work personally sometimes. That's more a credit to your ability to speak in intimate tones and spare wording without being too colloquial. I feel as if I've been caught reading a song you wrote to me.
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Re: Cold Cadence
Damn, this is good. It's wicked and nice. Makes me want to...makes me want to...something, like jump out and sing...or something. Your tone was lovely, I couldn't take my eyes off it.
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Thanks phon....i like that aspect and pepy thankyou, good catch.
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Nicely done, Lu. Extremely well done, actually. Don't know what else to say. I loved this. Damned fine.
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Thank you.
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I loved the tonality and word usage in this piece. I must admit all the capitals got to be a bit much to me this time around, but has the potential to grow on me.
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