[Eadha Deora]

You are a stranger to me,
crazy vast man,
almost a god,
a universe inhaled with your thoughts,
so that every day I remain
astounded and undone,
the circle of my knowledge lost
to the stars,
the heavens in your heart so untouchable
to these searching fingers,
that no matter how long I love you or how deep,
your magic remains the same,
a mystery to my mind.

[Vorcla]

Wow.

Don't know what else to say, Jenn - that pretty well sums it up. I love the persona of your woman/narrator in many of your poems. She's strong, independent, and yet vulnerable all at the same time. Very appealing. Your elemental images of nature, too - the stars, the heavens. A vast man who's almost a god. Just exquisite, hun.

[RENA HANDS]

What a shocker, Vorcla and I are the first two to respond...lol
Now pertaining to your poem...AMAZING! (I wish that my vocabulary was more, but at this time it is not.)

So with that, I must say your imagery is OUTSTANDING! The execution of emotions, the provocation of sentiments...INCREDIBLE! This is truly one hell of philosophical post! (Though most of your proses are STARTLING-but in a positive manner!)

I give this MARVELOUS posting a rating of 5/5!

[Rain]

I liked the way this was done, the vocabulary you used, it was not over done, captivating words used in simple sentences, which was an extremely nice touch.