[xtremelady]

[b] Lyrics/Song,


Has it really only been 15 days?
Since I met you,
I have been all a daze.
Since I met you,
I have feelings I cannot place.


I feel like a little girl,
Out on a limb,
With sense’s all awhirl,
I feel like a little girl,
Uncertain of this crazy world.

Don’t think, has to mean anything,
Doesn’t have to lead to love
Been ages since had this much fun
Damn, but it feels so good.

Don’t think, has to mean anything
Doesn’t have to be more than lust
I don’t need reassurance
That it won’t just all crumple to dust.

I feel like a little girl
Out on a limb,
With sense’s all awhirl,
I feel like a little girl,
Uncertain of this crazy world.

I know this cannot last
That tomorrow
Comes all too fast
Bringing the sorrow
Of once what was past
But hun...right now...right here....I couldn’t give a damn!

I feel like a little girl
Out on a limb,
With sense’s all awhirl,
I feel like a little girl,
Uncertain of this crazy world.

Has it really only been 15 days?
Since I met you,
I have been all a daze.
Since I met you,
I have feelings I cannot place.

[Vorcla]

Hey - you're getting really good at this, Claire. I like the feel of your songs - my kind of material. Very nice.

[Lubesh]

Hun..dont give a damn!.....brill. Thudding crashing tempo the res si quite soft in my head ...lol tune wise keep going mrs...v good.

[Nupur]

Brilliant! I could almost hear it being played. Very catchy indeed.

[xtremelady]

This one just flowed onto the page. Thanks Rick, real pleased you like

Yeah Lu – tunes keep filling my head up of late....especially when trying concentrate on my TOTM entry....

Well I am inspired to attempt more – thanks guys

[Vorcla]

Originally Posted by xtremelady

This one just flowed onto the page. Thanks Rick, real pleased you like

You're welcome, indeed.

Yeah Lu – tunes keep filling my head up of late....especially when trying concentrate on my TOTM entry....

...and that's when ya gotta go get 'em, because they'll probably be gems.

Well I am inspired to attempt more – thanks guys

Please do. It will make all of us very happy. BTW, pretty soon, between you, Bri and Nupur, 'Ali's' going to have a complete album!

[Phonoho]

This could use a little more essence, something a la Dylan, Springsteen, or what Etheridge did on "Come to my Window" to get us inside the voice and shoes of the speaker. A Petty-esque yearning.

[xtremelady]

Will consider and have a think about it – then get back to you on your suggestion Phonoho thanks for your thoughts; appreciated.

[xtremelady]

Phonoho okay went away thought about it – tried to see through your eyes....do see what you mean and I would love to be able to produce what you asking – u know what - I just but a little fledgling – and even when/if fly...could I ever produce greatness in this realm?....heck I not even play an instrument. – lol I think that’s the beginning to another tune. Did try harder with – ‘I Am Not Playing with You.’ See what you think.

Dare I admit what I would love to incorporate together?...can you imagine something similar/ like ‘Empty chairs at empty tables’ combined to rock format? ...wow...am I aiming too high? I would love to overlap ....capable...sighs...possibly not.

[superpararanger]

Originally Posted by xtremelady

[b] Lyrics/Song,


Has it really only been 15 days?
Since I met you,
I have been all a daze.
Since I met you,
I have feelings I cannot place.

whoa, that hit home for me. that's seriously my current situation. the ababa scheme is cool.

Originally Posted by xtremelady

I feel like a little girl,
Out on a limb,
With sense’s all awhirl,
I feel like a little girl,
Uncertain of this crazy world.

that just seems like it would have a melody that was catchy as f.. that's awesome.

Originally Posted by xtremelady

Don’t think, has to mean anything,
Doesn’t have to lead to love
Been ages since had this much fun
Damn, but it feels so good.

okay so i'm young and not all too familiar with which words could go where, but i think "don't think, this has to mean anything, doesn't have to lead to love it's been ages since i've had this much fun damn, but it feels so good" could maybe work? sorry, please excuse my inexperience.

Originally Posted by xtremelady

I know this cannot last
That tomorrow
Comes all too fast
Bringing the sorrow
Of once what was past
But hun...right now...right here....I couldn’t give a damn!

the only thing i can add about that is the 2nd to last line, you could maybe switch it around a bit.. "of what once was past" but it still sounds good.

Originally Posted by xtremelady

Has it really only been 15 days?
Since I met you,
I have been all a daze.
Since I met you,
I have feelings I cannot place.

good way to end it. i really liked this. nice job