[Vorcla]

(Adults only; persons under 18 years of age must leave the room!)

by the artist formerly known as Vorcla.

Lady, Lady,
Won't you come into my arms,
And spend the night?
Lady, Lady,
If we try, we might do something right.

Answer with your eyes,
Lay here by my side,
Sing to me...a lullabye.

There's a comforting breeze
Blowing in through my window.
And the wind chimes
Play a rhyme to the movement
Of your breasts against my skin...
I'm comin' in.

Lady, Lady, oooo-oooo,
Lady, Lady, oooo-oooo,
Lady, Lady, ooooo-oo.






Note: in the line "Lay here by my side," "Lay" is grammatically incorrect. Technically, it should be "Lie." However, this is a song employing poetic license. "Lie" just doesn't sound good!

[Theboss1985]

Unless I'm missing some hidden metaphor's I don't see the adults only in this but...

I love the line answer with your eyes...brilliant!!!

If this song got u laid by some hotties in college then it must sound REALLY good with music...LOL Just kiding

I Love it

[Vorcla]

You don't think there was a double entendre with "I'm comin' in?"

Thanks, man. I'll try to get an MP3 of it up here some day. It uses an open "E" tuning and has these really nice, ethereal chords.

[Anonymous]

I actually really liked it. I wish I could hear it to music I bet it would be decent. Like performed by Coheed and Cambria or something. Booyeah.

[Phonoho]

Note: in the line "Lay here by my side," "Lay" is grammatically incorrect. Technically, it should be "Lie." However, this is a song employing poetic license. "Lie" just doesn't sound good!

I wonder if that crossed the mind of Bob Dylan when he wrote Lay, Lady, Lay.

[Vorcla]

Originally Posted by Phonoho

I wonder if that crossed the mind of Bob Dylan when he wrote Lay, Lady, Lay.

Probably not!

[Venomous Vixen]

I like these Rick, simple and to the point... my favorite part being

Play a rhyme to the movement
Of your breasts against my skin...

Something about the "rhyme", like a game almost, and then you packed sound and visuals in there as well. Well done. I love lyrics from you!

[Vorcla]

Thanks, Bri. It's appreciated.

[Nupur]

These are pretty good, Rick. I agree about the lines Bri pointed out. Wonderful lyrics and now I can't wait to hear them. Upload the file!

[Vorcla]

Thanks, Nup.

[Rain]

That was pretty good, I am with the others hearing it would be sweet. But it was good, whenever I read these song lyrics it's hard to remember it's a song but I managed on this one. Good job Rick

btw I'm not 18 but YOU CAN'T STOP ME! it wasn't too bad anyway

[Vorcla]

Thanks, Tay.