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Re: Tooth and Nail
Hey, Trish -
This is great! Why don't you enter it in the CFPC #18 comp? It's Songs and Lyrics this time.
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Re: Tooth and Nail
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These were incredible hun. The chorus in particular is just jam packed with some fantastically arranged words. In particular, I like the corner of the eyes bit. I can completely picture it, and have found myself in situations where I bit my tongue and glared through the corners of my eyes. I have to agree with Rick, if you just wrote these you really should enter them in the CFPC!
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Re: Tooth and Nail
Oops, thanks for the editing. Lyrics, huh? I might just do that. Thanks for your comments. ^_^
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