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Old 24-11-2005, 10:07 AM
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One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

I'm not depressed anymore I've found spiritualism once more, I wrote this song out of pure emotion, if Jennifer my girlfriend, soon to be wife, died I'd want her to know these would be my last thoughts, I took my emotions though and turned it into a story kinda, so hope you like it

Verse1:
Grant one simple wish,
Grant my everything,
Cleanse the blood spilt on my hands,
Bring back the one you've taken away,
I'd trade my very own life,
Just to see her for one more day.
So conjure up a maricle,
Cause I'm gonna need one for today,
Looking into lifeless eyes,
As tears fell down my face.

Chrous:
Why, did this happen to me?
Just for a sign, I would give everything.
How could you let this be?
My lovers soul, has been released.

Verse2:
Now falling to my knees,
and begging your forgiveness,
How I'll forever miss your touch,
Forever taste your kiss,
Lost in my emotions,
I've wept by your side night and day,
It looked as if you were smiling,
When the angels took you away.
I'll take your hand,
and never let go...

Chrous:
Why, did this happen to me?
Just for a sign, I would give everything.
How could you let this be?
My lovers soul, has been released.

Bridge:
How was I to know,
as I awoke to see you smiling,
Now this wreckless hole,
Has only left me crying,
Just grant one wish,
One fucking wish.

Chrous:
Why, did this happen to me?
Just for a sign, I would give everything.
How could you let this be?
My lovers soul, has been released.

Verse3:
Another day has risen,
Has my wish been granted,
as I turn and see a face,
As I love you next was chanted,
I stood find us floating,
God had given us forever,
As I looked down at the murdering,
And how we had died together.
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Old 28-11-2005, 04:47 AM
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Re: One wish granted- 11/23/05 Lyrics

Anyone like?!
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Old 28-11-2005, 09:09 AM
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Re: One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

Lol don't you hate it when no one comments oh your stuff. Yeah i liked it very enjoyable. Nice rythm
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Wow. Great job.
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Re: One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

Yeah, LOL! Thanks I has seen where like 100 and sum people had viewed it but no comments yet LOL!
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Re: One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

i like...i have recommended it to head song lyrics in our selection of poems to head each cat. this or kourtess that is.good stuff as ever
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Re: One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

Thanks Lubesh, sorry I didn't login too lazy LOL!
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Re: One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

Too many nice responses on this forum so.....
It's CHORUS for @?#£ sake. CHORUS...
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Re: One Wish Granted - 11/23/05

I didn't read this. I'm tired of reading lyrics. I might read it later. I'm one of the greatest undiscovered lyricists of all time.
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