[Bissme]

When the hot blazing sun
Drops out from the blue sky
And the night time
Begins to settle over
The busy bustling city
She will be infront
Of a mirror
Making herself
Attractive, elegant and adorable
So that the men can't
Resist the temptation
To have her
In their arms and
In their beds

She is a woman
With a thousand names
But only has one duty
Which is to fulfill
Her client's dirty desire

Prostitution is the only way
For her to bring enough
Bread and butter
To her family

[angel]

this is cool bissme. i love the way this reads

[SeaN]

kel have you exhausted the archives back to 2004 already? how did you ever find this one?

I agree, well written and the way is flows is very pleasing to the eye/ear. I wish he didn't get so literal with the last stanza though. Nice poem all the same.

[angel]

Originally Posted by NYUphamism

kel have you exhausted the archives back to 2004 already? how did you ever find this one?

I agree, well written and the way is flows is very pleasing to the eye/ear. I wish he didn't get so literal with the last stanza though. Nice poem all the same.

lol i love reading lol

[RENA HANDS]

The word is in front other than the one error the poem was fantastic.

I don't know if I would have used "attractive, elegant and adorable." Adorable seems to childish when describing a woman's physical image.

"Making herself attractive, elegant and pleasing to the eye?" Just a simple thought, please don't take my suggestion to seriously. I only think adorable is irrelevant in this situation.