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Old 14-11-2003, 09:51 PM
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Two Kinds of War

Two kinds of wars(metrical poem)

Thunders claps going like heavy bawls

Lions leap and replace swaying blades

Pipers blow quite unfilled

Troops deployed with distress

Tactic cause the very unwished ending of disturbed war

Corpse between bloods appear red

Axes shrink within sands that are heavy weighted

Virtues are better life

Goodness serves with anew marine move

Water flow over mounds

Tombs admire anthem there

Nation flag do entice doughy souls

Whistles are blowing for triumphed queen

Queen defeat the amaze king living in Spain

Talent great kings deploy no enough army and tools engaged

Thousand of obeys because of giving threats

Clusters of lands observed by before bleeding bloods

Fortunes sell people s life

Freaking wings blow alike nail belong to wolf

Tigers and bears result with exceeded fights

Freedom and love required big approve

Giving off our wiping tears apply all reputes

Combats are evils impair more unfair

Peoples need to imbue fully with joys again

Falcons have wielding wings
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Thumbs down Re: Two Kinds of War

There is imagery here, but not an actual ending.

The spacing is incorrect also.
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